Tuesday, April 8, 2008

hundreds of ways

he said he loved me best
in the summer, and
traced Orion's belt between
three freckles on my
jaw.

1 comments:

As Bjorn said...

Good use of Orion's belt. The real language of poetry is metaphor and the implications of Orion's belt here is the nodal point of the piece. Jolly fun.

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